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Dedreia
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since 2000-07-10
Posts 172
Kokomo, Indiana, United States

0 posted 2000-08-11 07:05 AM


Another sleepless night...
I seem to have so many of late.
I try so hard to clear my mind,
but it's to no avail.
So I sit here in front of this computer,
My thoughts lingering over you.
It's only been a few days
since I last talked to you
Though it feels like an eternity
as I sit here wondering...
Do you miss me too?



"It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen

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Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2000-08-11 01:04 PM


Ahhhhhh short yet sweet.  And boy oh boy do I know this feeling!

DkW


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-08-11 08:26 PM


Oh, Dee, I feel this same way, and its really wearing on me. Nice summation of the thoughts.
Cat...

LOTR
Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68
New Jersey
3 posted 2000-08-12 04:09 AM


Once again you've hit the nail right on the head with your work. God I know this feeling all to well.

Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find

LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

4 posted 2000-08-12 04:14 AM



Very cute!

Virgin Suïcide
Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
5 posted 2000-08-12 07:17 AM


ouch, you touched the right spot again...!

love, Virgin Suïcide...

And I shall not rest, til I get my loved ones back..........

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
6 posted 2000-08-12 07:57 AM


Dee, I can relate to this. I don't know how many nights i waited in front of my computer hoping to hear from that special someone. Good poem.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

7 posted 2000-08-12 08:03 AM


Hmm... thoughts expressed well  
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