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bubbles chan
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since 2000-08-08
Posts 17


0 posted 2000-08-10 10:51 PM


Square crackers of cheese
Fill my mouth with much delight,
Made with real cheese.

Time and space are not constant, but floating around like the inside of a giant metaphysical lava lamp

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SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-08-10 10:58 PM


~A yummy haiku
even better white cheddar
tasty little things

*Great work you! Uum,...I never ever wrote one of those so may not be right. Hhm. Take care. I'm enjoying your treats. *Peace.

Wren
Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

2 posted 2000-08-10 11:01 PM


My dear Bubbles-chan
I suggest one about wax
It should be easy
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

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