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Ist of May 1995
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Ist of May 1995 |
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Kirsty24 Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 40Australia |
The years have gone now How they flew by Yet still I miss you Why did you have to die? It is funny now I miss the little things the most Being belted by your slipper Or the letter in the post Each time today passes I will always have a cry Only because today is the day I should have said goodbye I guess through grief and selfishness That is something I forgot to do But with you being my greatest love How could I say goodbye to you?? Slowly memories are fading away But the pain is still the same If only I could wake up from this dream And have you back again. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sad, so sad, I still miss my Grandfather 11 years later. Nice writing.. catalinamoon |
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nicolette Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 42St. Paul, Minnesota |
Beautifully written poem, but so sad. Reminds me of how I felt losing my best friend and how I still feel now on his anniversary. You expressed the sadness and longing very well....thanks. |
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Kirsty24 Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 40Australia |
Catilinamoon - This poem was actually written about my grandfather whom was the heart and soul of my life at that stage. There will never be another that can replace the bond between he and I. Nicolette - The loss of a friend or a family member alwasy bears a great deal of sadness. I am just pleased that 5 years on I can finally express that |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
definatly a touching poem....yet so sad. wish there was something to say, but i know that only time can make pain go away... good luck.... salma |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Lovingly written and very insightful... allan |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Very touchning poem. Makes me cry... |
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Kirsty24 Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 40Australia |
Thanks guys.. It really means alot to me that my poetry moves not only me but people that I have never met and may never meet... Thanks again!! Makes me happy to realise that there are people out there that understand how I felt at the time that I wrote that poem |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Kristy this is nice, but sad. It made me think of my dad, who died three years ago come August 13th.  Keep smiling and keep up the good work  .Be Well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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