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a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 392


0 posted 2000-08-10 09:46 AM


WHERE SOME ONE YOU LOVE IS.

This eve it is extremely lonley...
where some one you love is.
This eve it is terribley cold...
where some one you love is.
This eve it is uncomparibly dark...
where some one you love is.
This eve there are chilling whispers coming from...
where some one you love is.
This eve there are arms reaching out for you from...
where some one you love is.
This eve there are memories screaming to not be forgotten from...
where some one you love is.
This eve there are tears falling on the cold soil...
where some one you love is.
This eve it is so very cold...
where some one you love is...


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

© Copyright 2000 a-alibaster (H.A.R.) - All Rights Reserved
Broken
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since 2000-03-12
Posts 271
The woods
1 posted 2000-08-10 10:00 AM



Powerful poem a-alibaster, and I can relate to it well. The sadness and loneliness are familiar to to me. But I enjoyed this piece very much, although it made me (more) sad.
Yours truly
~Broken~

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
PA
2 posted 2000-08-10 09:48 PM


sighing at the coldness one can feel when inside the memories are of warmth
~~soft hugs, a
Maureen

Wren
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since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

3 posted 2000-08-10 11:10 PM


Interesting spin I wasen't expecting from simply reading the title. Good one!  
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2000-08-10 11:32 PM


So cold, sad, and well written.
Take care
catalinamoon

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