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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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No rainbow tears, no dew drops kiss, no feather touch, no blissful bliss, all daffodil has long since died, no rippled pond to still my mind... another sun another day another wish-- myself away... no pistol pointed to my head-- no point-- I'm already dead. |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i love this one! i feel the same as these words express... yours, Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Wonderfull! Wonderfully sad poem, loved it. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Very dark, very sad. I do not live thus cannot die My best I'll give in one more try Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
WOW sorrow abounds in this one this one certainly got its message accross to me.... hope all is well ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow. Deep, at first, I had a blonde moment, but now I see it. Good job, I feel that way sometimes... Jenn |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Serenity,...No point??? Gosh, this is dark. This is so how I feel sometimes....well, I suppose that what I took from it for me, is so how I feel sometimes. This is powerful and definately affective writing! Superbo Jobo! Take care SGurl. *Peace. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Dark, and tragic... very expressive... regards, sudhir |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks everyone. I think this is the worst case of PMS I've ever had....sighs...and one naughty giggle... |
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