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Forever........(and then some)
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Forever........(and then some) |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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Follow me into the dark I will show you the way STOP! Dont listen to others Dont listen to what they say They dont know my powers Or the things I can do for you Just have a little faith in me As do as I tell you to do Grab my hand is yours And hold on very tight Your body will go numb And yes face a very pale white You may feel a little different Taking your soul causes some pain But the pain will soon end And look at what you will gain Others can no longer hurt you Or make you cry your tears But you will be mine for an eternity I will be the one you fear! Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
DKW, this is another, dark....yet takes the reader by the hand!!!! You are so good at this!! Loved it, always look forward to more!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Love the title..love the poem..nice one ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Scary, but enticing. Great writing. Catalinamoon |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
A very good poem. I like the way you've taken the reader by the hand. A very well written poem! |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
OHHH Yeah! I liked this one!! I..... Thanx!! Click |
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