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SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396


0 posted 2000-08-09 10:29 AM


Run Free With Me (for Cat). (and all).   .

Run free
with me
down paths
of soil
feet bare
without
a care
over lions
of dandy
and puddles
of tea
to fields
of fruited
trees.

Skip free
with me
down trails
of light
with wind
blown hair
and smiles
to share
and rains
of kisses
from seas.

Dance free
with me
down roads
of tune
with twists
and turns
of the happy
we've earned
and tickles
for you
and me.

*Just a little whip up after the 'Mute' poem and reply*
*Peace.



[This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 08-09-2000).]

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poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
1 posted 2000-08-09 10:32 AM


oh this is gorgeous...dandelions, tea puddles, and all! this is truly a beauty!
~Dawn  

whatcha doing in this darkness baby
when you know love will set you free?
will you stay in the sea forever
Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
2 posted 2000-08-09 11:38 AM


Oh I do agree... very beautiful indeed.   It is so peaceful.
Thanks
DkW


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
3 posted 2000-08-09 11:46 AM


Oh my god!!! How the beauty and the carefree feelings, and the free of pain desires all bounce right off the paper!!!This was so so good!!! Im going right now with you..Ready??? Just absolutely loved it, THANK YOU!!!!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
4 posted 2000-08-09 12:53 PM


SpitFire
wonderful work
from you
i see
i read
i like
over here

My regards
Sudhir

catalinamoon
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2000-08-09 02:48 PM


What a great invite, I am on my way, running down the path right now..If only I could leave work  
Awesome poem, SF, love it to pieces.
Cat...

Wren
Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

6 posted 2000-08-09 09:01 PM


Can I come too? PLEASE? Pretty please with a cherry on top?
-Wren
P.S. What a lovely world you have created in this poem!

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
7 posted 2000-08-10 04:59 AM


Me too!


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
8 posted 2000-08-10 05:07 AM


Fire,
No invitation needed I'm coming with you and that's that.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
9 posted 2000-08-25 12:54 PM


oh spitfire, you made me cry with this one.  what a friend you are truly.  so beautiful your wishes for your friends.  thank you dear one. love ya.

kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

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