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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
In my hand, Firmly gripped hands of white, Hidden stand, In shadow, Red stained steel in open sight, Doesn’t go, It lingers, Reminds of events just past, I finger, Danger’s hilt, Pondering the evil just cast, Living spilt, I carry death in my hand. Gloom 2000 |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This is different but I like it. I particularly like I finger danger's hilt "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you,Kethry, glad you enjoyed my poetic musings. Gloom |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
i like this a lot... especially the lines: Pondering the evil just cast, Living spilt, I carry death in my hand. and i like the rhyming of hilt and spilt... and the idea of carrying death... you have my admiration, kat |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
This poem is just cool! What a creative, refreshing little tidbit that was! Thanks! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, silentsky & Wren Death is a common theme with me, I try not to me too morid about it as I express my feeling in my way of poetry. Glad that you could enjoy my humble words Gloom |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
your humble words linger in my mind ~~soft thanks for posting here, PG Maureen * do I catch a glimpse of a smile...maybe???? |
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