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bubbles chan Junior Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 17 |
The cheese wheel rolls wild, Fresh with the smell of goats milk, It has been cultured. |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
FUNNY! Just what the world needs....a haiku about cheese..... Good poem, Bubbles-chan! *neh* -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Yum! Where's the salad?  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Good cultured Haiku there Be well Kethry< !signature--> "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 08-09-2000).] |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
bubbles chan, i like your poem very much. very well written... you manage to embrace the haiku kindly kat |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Welcome to DP....may I say I love Feta cheese!! Hope to see more poems...now Im hungry!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
I like your style. and I like this poem. More, more... !  |
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