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AnGeLiX17
Junior Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 46
Salisbury, NC

0 posted 2000-08-08 06:14 PM


You are like an addiction
that I keep coming back to
you are like an affliction
I can't get enough of you
and every time I try to run away
you and your clever antics somehow make me stay
I don't want you but I need you
I don't need you but I want you
and without you I die inside
but with you I want to hide
from myself


© Copyright 2000 Kristi - All Rights Reserved
Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-08-08 07:06 PM


oh wow!!! i like this one alot!!! do you mind if i print it out????

~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~

~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~

Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
2 posted 2000-08-08 07:18 PM


There are so many kinds of addictions..this reminds us of that..and its not a good thing when we know someone isn't good for us. Very good poem!!! Alot of food for thought!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-08-08 07:53 PM


It's a cruel twist of fate when you know he is bad for you, you should move on, but somehow you can't...  A terrible place to be in.. almost like your punishing yourself...
Superb work hon  

To believe In Karma, is to believe in Destiny. From birth to death every man is weaving thread by thread his destiny. Karma is brought about through

Wren
Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

4 posted 2000-08-08 10:10 PM


Good job, great read!
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
5 posted 2000-08-08 11:20 PM


YOu've summed this up so well excellent poem,
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