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Mel2Lizz
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since 2000-08-08
Posts 20
Alamosa, Colorado

0 posted 2000-08-08 05:22 AM


Do I really love you?

Do I really love you?
Oh I wish I knew...
I can hear your voice,
I can see your face...
I feel your touch,
How I wish I could be in your arms so much...
You have saved my life,
I have gotten rid of that knife..(in my heart)...
You've made me smile,
You've made me cry....
You touched my heart like no one has,
You have all of the class...
Do I really love you?
Yes I do...

© Copyright 2000 Melanie M - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-08-08 11:41 AM


Sweet poem, if he did all that for you, I guess you do love him. Hope all happiness follows.
Peace
Catalinamoon

CAVECANEM
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 43
Nevada USA
2 posted 2000-08-08 11:52 PM


A beautiful little poem...I it brings back memories of another time for me.....
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2000-08-09 05:24 AM


So glad you decided "Yes"

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

kynder
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
4 posted 2000-08-14 06:25 PM


very precious and sweet.  how wonderful for you to be able to release your words of love!!

kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

Jenn Cirrincione
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5 posted 2000-08-15 07:19 PM


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[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 08-15-2000).]

Jenn Cirrincione
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6 posted 2000-08-15 07:19 PM


I've always been able to decide "no" on that last go around there. Men have really been a lot of trouble for me. I hope to one day be able to say..."yes I do"- Good Poem.
Jenn

darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
7 posted 2000-08-15 07:37 PM


That's a really beautiful poem about love. I'm glad you found someone so special.

Dark Star

firejerm
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
8 posted 2000-08-15 09:28 PM


I wish my experience similar to this turned out the same way.  She said all those things to me, and then broke my heart all in the same day.  Go figure.  I'm happy for you!  

Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

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