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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-08-07 09:01 PM


Drops of
love
trickle
down
cold
stone wall
rivulets of
passion
pool
of intent
dipped into
warily
biting
cold
iced
assault
frozen


[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 08-07-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Nikolette Sadness
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Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337
port richey fl.
1 posted 2000-08-07 09:28 PM


i'm trying to think of a word to describe this but i can't...i like this one cat...
yours,
Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-08-07 09:34 PM


~POW-ER-FUL!!! Writing cold as ice. Yum. Cat,...you've got yourself a truly unique winner here. Take care S. *Peace.
lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
3 posted 2000-08-08 04:28 AM


* shudder *
Excellent, cat!  


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



EagleOne
Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
4 posted 2000-08-08 09:26 AM


This is simply awesome work! Love it!

God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
5 posted 2000-08-08 09:37 AM


I'm going to read this one over and over and hug myself to keep warm *shiver* Great work.
Be well
Kethry.


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole

Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
6 posted 2000-08-08 11:15 AM


Ohhh I found this so interesting, and loved the style!! A little different for you, yet just as good!!!! Nice job!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
7 posted 2000-08-09 01:20 PM


catalinamoon...
               This one makes me want to
               grab a hot Baileys and coffee
               and slip under an afghan by
               the log fireplace!!!
               Think I'll go back for a
                    second read!!
    


I have only one goal
in life..
It Is:
To have more than
one goal in
Life!!
~ ~ by Sunny ~ ~

poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
8 posted 2000-08-09 01:33 PM


this is good...just about too darn good...
getting chilly in here girl!

giving warmth,
~Dawn

whatcha doing in this darkness baby
when you know love will set you free?
will you stay in the sea forever
Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live

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