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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2000-08-07 11:26 AM


I'm sad to see you go away,
I hate to see you stay.
I love the way I smile at your goofiness,
I hate your verbal abuse.

I don't understand why I feel shafted,
Now that you are gone,
I fixed it so it is this way.
All my doing, and it's what I wanted.

I miss having a hand to hold,
I miss a hug right after.
I want to hate you and all your kind...
But I get lonely faster and faster.

[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 08-07-2000).]

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poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
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1 posted 2000-08-07 11:35 AM


oops! this poem just changed right before my eyes...iwas replying to your other poem..but now im replying to this one! then again...im going to say about the same thing over again...once again youve taken words from my heart and put them in view! so many of us feel the way you do.


~Dawn< !signature-->

whatcha doing in this darkness baby
when you know love will set you free?
will you stay in the sea forever
Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live


[This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 08-07-2000).]

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