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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2000-08-06 09:26 PM


Sometimes I wish that I could fly...
Far, far, away from every naked eye.
I wish to go way up into the clouds,
And wave goodbye all of my sorrow.

I believe that this is what heaven feels like,
Like warm, swift wind blowing free.
All of my pain will slip away,
Above the ground there is no hate.

A caring angel saves the day...
A bird swoops down so happily...
Creatures of the air live so beautifully,
Even by themselves they soar ecstatically.

© Copyright 2000 Jennifer Parker - All Rights Reserved
Deranger
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1 posted 2000-08-06 11:20 PM


We’ve all wished we could escape sometimes.   Persistence is a great survival technique.  Just keep going and don’t look back.  Nice work.  



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Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
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2 posted 2000-08-07 03:16 AM


Its 3am and your poem so expressed what Im feeling right now. I loved it, and it was so nice to read what Im feeling!!! Great, Great, poem!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

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