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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2000-08-06 03:33 PM


A pushing force comes from within,
Yet holds me back.
I try to leave and it makes me stay,
All I want is to go away.

This unknown force staples shut my heart,
And prolongs the pain I feel.
I'm scared sometimes, that I may never be free.
I just want to live...to be me.

I love the time I get to be,
Just this happy side of me,
This smiling version of what I've come to know,
Occasionally is what they see.

Please understand when I am sad,
This gripping pain's what I've had,
I feel this force attacking me,
Ripping away what I long to be.

© Copyright 2000 Jennifer Parker - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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1 posted 2000-08-06 08:02 PM


Jenn we understand the happy you and the sad you, you don't need to ask for understanding here in passions, we care...
I know the feeling though, like you almost have to apologise for being down, lost or sad etc.  Great work hon!!  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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