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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2000-08-06 12:05 PM


I've never been your 'other half',
I may not even want to be.
All I know is this space between us...
This empty time, it's killing me.

I've been missing you so much,
And I don't really know why.
The men in my life are always screwed up...
Maybe I just want a sense of peace.

I have this road that went untravelled,
And I question that now.
A misunderstanding took you away,
A grudge will now hold us apart.

I don't want a kiss,
That always ruins things.
I just want a hug...
That kind that just makes it all okay.

I'm sorry that I'm missing you..
I just don't know what to say.
It angers me to think,
Things may never be the same.

© Copyright 2000 Jennifer Parker - All Rights Reserved
Deborah1
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1 posted 2000-08-06 12:43 PM


Oh Jenn I know that hug that you speak of, the one that counts for someone really knowing what we need and are feeling...this was full of emotions, you did an excellent job!! Hope things turn out ok...Keep writing!!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

jerralynne
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2 posted 2000-08-07 02:42 AM


this is awesome ~ i relate so very much ~ am going through a big "missing him" with a man whom i've known for 9 years who has been my friend, my lover, who knows me ~ good luck with everything & everyone & i hope your "missing" gets reprieve soon ~ jerralynne
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