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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. 
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for Fran Breathe a kiss into my soul and let my spirit rise Whisper then my name aloud and look into my eyes Take me in your loving arms and hold me to your breast Lay me in your downy bed together let us rest Upon me cast your spell of love and charm me to your will Pour for me a draught of love and let me drink my fill Tell me of your darkest dreams and let me dry your tears Take my hand and let me love you through the many years This is an old one but I felt compelled to post it after reading Poutprincess' 'Temptation' Sing while you may -The Prophet Q'spel Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen -The Prophet Q'spel |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I approached this one gingerly and then just fell in and got lost in the deep, deep, emotion of it. Maybe it should be called Chasm though cause you need a map to get out. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
I loved this one! raw emotion always gets to me! Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
How delightful! What lovely sentiments! Really delightful! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Very nice work indeed! So glad You decided to post it. What may seem like an old one to You, may be refreshingly new to us...Lucky Fran! ~Sash~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, Ian, so glad you posted this. How nice there is a man in love amongst us.. cat... |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Ian, this was really so nice to read! How well you express your love, a beautiful poem, and it is nice as Cat said to know about this love you have!! Teriffic job!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
I hate to bring you all down, but I haven't seen Fran in years. Like I said, this is an OLD one. But yes, I did love her and I still consider her a friend. She always had a habit of disappearing but we will meet again one day. Thank you all for your kind words. Sing while you may -The Prophet Q'spel Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen -The Prophet Q'spel |
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