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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
How to say I'm sorry? How to make it right? How to forgive myself? How can I sleep tonight? Where did I forsake us? Where did I break your heart? Where did I lose you? Where can I begin to start? What can I do to show you? What can I have to say? What can I give of myself? What are my chances today? When does it hurt the most? When does it ever end? When does it let you go? When will you love me again? Click [This message has been edited by Click (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
ohhhhhhhhhh Click .... Great questions! So many times I have felt this and u did a wonderful job explaining it all. Great work!  DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hey Click, this was a questionable work,lol But I liked it cause I have the same questions. Especially about relationships that have gone wrong. Be well "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Indeed. What a powerful expression of the lack of communication in life. Very well done! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Dear Friend~~You were up late last night torturing yourself again, huh? I really like this poem. The questions hit home. I wish I had the answers for You...Please be well, My Friend. ~Sash~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
The questions with no answers. So many of them. Keep seeking, perhaps the answer will appear. Great poem as well. Take care Catalinamoon Practice can make anything perfect...even grief can become an art. Merrit Malloy |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
The reader can feel the turmoil here, that desperate need for the answers!! Well spoken, I have asked many of those questions too. Excellent job!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I agree,...the reader can definately feel these words...this honest expression. Oh, you've done well with this. I've been in a spot like that before and have asked similar questions. Such a helpless feeling invades. Aww. Great work here. Take care now. *Peace. |
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Kirsty24 Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 40Australia |
Until I fell in love and got engaged recently I was asking these questions as well.. Now that I have finally found my happiness and lifes calling I no longer need to ask. But thanks for sheding light on how we all feel at some point or another   |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Click, some times things that should not...make me cry...and this did just that... so many heartfelt questions you have posed, lovely placed into form. It never ends-only becomes easier. Life has a way of hardening a heart and soul, some more than others. At least I think it is lifes way of making us all able to cope. Much good luck to you... Until... "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Gosh... fits me like a glove this one... wonderfuly said. thank you ! |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
you never cease to amaze me with the depth of your pure heart. such a strong love within you, click. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Very poignant Click... nice work |
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