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Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
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New Hampshire

0 posted 2000-08-05 08:17 PM




He fancied himself
A fine gent
Eager to serve
That talk of him..
Was desultory

They were wenches
He said..
Trying to destroy the fabric
of his daily existence

He was a depraved soul
Hopeless prey

Why then was
His claim to nobility..
A disorderly pile
Of crumbs




The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

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1 posted 2000-08-06 01:13 AM


Ouch, I feel the pain that you write about here. Thanks for sharing.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-08-06 01:59 AM


Nice one here. It touched me where I live, with my delusions of grandeur.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole

lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
3 posted 2000-08-06 05:48 AM


Fine snapshot, deb!
Very well done!!


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2000-08-06 10:02 AM


Love this Deb, sounds like the same guy as in mine. Too many of these and not enough of the good ones.
Sandra

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 08-06-2000).]

SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

5 posted 2000-08-06 01:34 PM


~Goodness,...you and Cat are really setting out some very real and definately depressing images of these fellas. Eeek. Deb1,...this is great in it's writing yet so yuck in it's truth. Super portrayal. Take care. *Peace.
Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
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New Hampshire
6 posted 2000-08-06 04:23 PM


Thanks everyone for the nice responses!! Its good sometimes just to reflect and write about our experiences!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

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