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Lonely Miles |
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BigPimpinSk8tr Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 17Chambersburg, PA, USA |
Lonely Miles Miles between us, torn apart, longing, needing, wanting, a broken heart. A lonely tear on a saddened cheek, crushed, lost, unable to speak. Head hung low, hands in face, lookin for ways out of this place. Yearning, aching, crying, the constant feel of dying. Lost, confused, no place left to go, the miles between seem to grow. Caring, despairing, staring, unable to push you from my mind, wishing not just movies, but time rewind. Then put in slow motion, cuz what I wanna do, is spend a lot of time, or forever with my you. Tears falling, crashing, splashing as they hit the ground, so much love, in you I’ve found. How so lucky, I always wonder, you shook my life, like crashing thunder. Hugging, kissing, loving, is when we are together, hoping to be with you, forever. But until we can, we’ll have to make due, and I’ll just keep, memories of you. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
WOW, This is a awesome. I can competely realte to this feelings. I have been having a hard time putting my thoughts into words. Thank you for doing it for me.  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wow. I liked How so lucky I always wonder wehn you shook my life with thunder, and I liked the single words with a common theme I've been trying to do that with a poem I'm writing. Guess you got the words first. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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