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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
In darkness There are shadows. To have shadows There must also be light. Do I hide in the darkness consumed by the shadows, or do I reach for the promise given by the light? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Tough choice sometimes, isn't it. Shadows are safer sometimes. But go for the light, if only to see what happens. It might even be good cat... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I agree with Cat. Aim high, it is better to fly briefly and fall than to remain on the ground looking up to the sky. enjoyed the poem. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
I think that the light is all we can hold to....if we hide from it ,it may not come our way again. Click |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
I think I'll stick to the shadows. That way no one can see what I'm up to! Mwahaha! (maniacal laughter ensues)< !signature--> Sing while you may -The Prophet Q'spel Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen -The Prophet Q'spel [This message has been edited by Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith (edited 08-05-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I agree with everyone except Ian, go for the light, it's better to soar for a while than to crawl through the gutter. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Ditto to the light!  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Thanks everyone,for all the support you give!...Vey funny Ian...I can just see You in a dark, shadow-cast alley...with dark cape swirling, and hat cocked to conceal the demonic red gleam in Your eyes! |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i enjoyed the poem....then as i read through the replies i guess i got a bit of counseling along the way! hahah..yes, do reach for the light, but dont leave the safety of the shadows until you are ready. whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sash,...definately reach,...and give it your all. Aaah,...perhaps you could grab hold of me and pull me that way too. Great poem. Take care. *Peace. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Sash, I think I've missed some of your work here at DP, I'll have to watch more carefully..This was a well made point, and a really great poem. Short and speaks volumes!!! I say go for the light too! Hope to see more from you!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
Wow, Sash, you must be watching me. You described my normal Saturday night in such detail. Just kidding (of course). I really do agree with the other replies. In matters of the heart and the spirit, reach for the light. It's too easy to get lost otherwise. Sing while you may -The Prophet Qa'sepel Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen -The Prophet Qa'sepel |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
the forever unanswered question... good work!!! kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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