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Michael G
Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-08-05 05:34 PM


The dance of the light that falls to me
of circus poets that cling to thee
completion of memeories that have yet to come
the catacombs of silence that bring me home.
Now hell has his visit in my soul
the picture perfection of what I know
bring forth the dance upon the light
and devils join in their delight.
To the Venomette's and their haunting strings
I dance the joy of hell I bring
for my fingers that complete my sin
The dance of the dead we all begin.

© Copyright 2000 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
DJLI
Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA
1 posted 2000-08-05 05:37 PM


dark, but really good.  

EVEN ANGELS FALL.

Marina
Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
2 posted 2000-08-05 09:59 PM


Very thought provocking Michael.  A poem such as this would have taken me all day.  

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2000-08-06 05:17 AM


and I thought there was only life in life,   This is great imagery. I loved that we begin the dance from our first breath and I love:
completion of memories that have yet to come.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole

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