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BigPimpinSk8tr
Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 17
Chambersburg, PA, USA

0 posted 2000-08-05 03:44 PM


It all began with a photo of you,
and the love that I have too.
Everytime I see it my heart will melt,
it’s because of all the feeling I felt.
And still do feel,
but it all seems unreal.
If God’s there is he cruel?
why can’t I be with you?
Everyday without you a blow is thrown,
how can God leave us so alone?
But I believe He gives us all we get,
otherwise I don’t think we would’ve met.
During storms we’re under his tent,
cuz our love’s heaven sent.
But He made us so far apart,
and everyday it just breaks my heart.
All the time I sit and wonder why,
I always feel I want to cry.
The feelings that bring me down so low,
bring me back to your beautiful photo.
Now I have two or three,
and it’s more of you I see.
You with me is my only dream,
the sight of you makes me gleam.
Us together forever is my fantasy,
and I wonder can it be?
I know you love me too,
and I know you’ll be true.
And it all brings me to,
the photo I have of you.
24/7 is when your on my mind,
in everything but you, I’m falling behind.
I don’t quite know what you see in me,
you broke down my wall and straight to my heart you see, maybe that’s how you see what it is you see in me.
But every time I doubt I look deep inside and know,
and tears bring me back to my only love’s photo.
I hope someday, we’ll be a permanent two,
but until that day I’ll always be in love with you.
I know it sounds weird and maybe a little nuts,
but my heart aches and longs, for your touch.
I want to give you hugs and fill your life with kisses,
cuz my lonely heart is sayin, it’s you it misses.
I love you too much to ever let you go,
and every time I’m down I come back to my photo.
If I ever doubt, I remember our love is true,
and that will always bring me, to the photo I have of you.



© Copyright 2000 Michael J. Lentini - All Rights Reserved
MMoonchild
Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
PA
1 posted 2000-08-05 03:47 PM


If I ever doubt, I remember our love is true,
and that will always bring me, to the photo I have of you

I felt the longing and beauty in your words, welcome BPS
~~soft smiles
Maureen

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-08-05 03:52 PM


~Hey there,...Welcome here!!!  This poem is like a bleeding cry from the heart. Very touching. Well written. Thanks for sharing. Take care. *Peace.


*BTW,...what are you riding these days?

EagleOne
Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
3 posted 2000-08-05 06:12 PM


Welcome! I look forward to more of your work.

God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



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