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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland 
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I have not been until now, I am finally conforming to my girlie ways. Baby why move so with strings attached? Raw nerves, freshly plucked teeth, and warm milk served to the boil piercing deflated skin. She wears leather I dress in pink, from there I crossover. I would swan - lake were I more flexible. Save conversation for Sunday for it is our day of rest not to love. Don’t judge on first glance for the mirror ball adds an extra shine to the tarnished boys. Fresh smiles can buy your soul and keep you trapped under their bucking torsos. I’d limit the drink as it makes me liberated. Baby, the curtain rises, you take to the stage a cabaret clone from 1973, I don’t remember back then but surely you look sexy underneath that skirt and tie, top hat and cane. We’ll have a party tonight. Only now I realise as you smile on the encore, the strings tied to your teeth. Why do you beg the queens to pull them free? You call to me in pain. Baby I would feel sympathy but they have tied you down on your request! I make my own way home, What I have seen I can not regret. Wash off the makeup to reveal skin I have not seen since the cabaret scene. Take off roughly my dress, scrap off the eyeliner, smile in pride, I think I’ll burn that dress… …in my bedroom tonight, then I’ll make over all mementoes of you. Darling baby, treasure what you have laid down. I found myself a cat, much easier to care for than a cabaret baby. ==== Kiss, Kiss tell. experimentation. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
*blink* *scratching head* fumbling around for the answer, ive got these images screaming at me bringing forth all sorts of scenarios (mostly due to the deviants i hang out with)......may i ask you to grace me with another informative email? this one, i gotta figure out! "Only now i realise as you smile on the encore,the strings tied to your teeth. why do you be the queens to pull them free? you call to me in pain. Baby I would feel sympathy but they have tied you down on your request! I make my way home, what i have seen i can not regret." Im fixated. I know a place where I can go when Im low,into your arms I can go. ~The Lemonheads |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Gawd, Brian...You have GOT to come to New Orleans, baby...did I love this? I LOVED THIS!!! But then, I love the crazy life... awesome, me friend...now, let's see if we can get the seams of those stockings straight... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
hmmmm....another experiment, hey...and what is the outcome...may I ask..has the lab exploded...Very vivid picture...sad and tawdry and interesting. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
pout, e-mail on its way. Thanks for your wonderful reply. maybe you should out with less warp minded deviants. LOL. I am interested to hear what scenarios you were thinking about. serenity, yes those stocking just don't fit, it is my wobbly knees and hairy legs. Get away with that leg wax...arrrggghhhhhh..lol Thanks for your wonderful reply. Martie, well there has been an accident and the flying killer poodles have escaped. Be on the look out. I am creating murderous cabbages to catch the poodles. LOL. Thanks for your wonderful comments. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
I am with poutprincess...I wouldn't mind an email explaining this one a bit...or I will ask to see what she learns...many images and thoughts and just am in a quandry over this one Brian...(and I hate to jus t say I loved it when I am not sure why ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Brian,...not sure why but these totally intense poems that you write always tangle me up....they make me laugh, shed a tear, grit my teeth in rage,...everything. I find things in them each time I read them again...and feel different things as well. I twist your words to say things to me and I find myself lost in thought for a while after reading you. Your writing always has some sort of effect on me. *sigh*,...well,...for now,...I walk away from the pc with a brain full of thoughts to pick through. Thanks. Take it EZ. *Peace. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I always enjoy your work Brian and I couldn't let this one go by without comment. oh! and I think you're right to stay away from that leg wax..lol. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Well... I liked this but I'm not sure why. The images are too tangled in my brain to sort out. Perhaps you could join me at the Sydney Mardi Gras and we could discuss deviance in depth. lol. Be well (even if insane) Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you crack me up.... ya know this is all Poet Femmes fault.. you havent been the same since she wrote you in her poem in that french maids uniform LOL ya know my poem in open ... the line where it says... "there are so many women living inside of me" WEll....... I think you just set a few of your own free  way cool-bri-guy... I do so love the way your poetic mind wanders and pink is your color   later-experimentation-gator eve |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Maureen, I will send you an e-mail ASAP. THanks for your comments. Spitfire, you sure know how to make a guy glow. I got a huge smile on my bright blushing face. THank you so much for your very generous words. EagleOne, thanks for your comments. And if you saw my hairy legs then you would understand my fears of lefg wax. LOL Kethry, I have friends who were at the Mardi Gras in Sydney. Looks like great fun, and very colourful. THanks for your wonderful comments. Jan, you think Poet FF corrupted me, ya right!?! I was always a twisted little person. Why not flaunt my female side, in fact I think I might be the first male lesbian. LOL THanks for your wonderful comments. "To the centre of the city where all roads meet, waiting for you,To the depths of the ocean where all hopes sank, searching for you," Joy divison |
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