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DJLI
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA

0 posted 2000-08-05 04:13 AM


The phone rings,
it sounds far away,
as if an another world.

Reality left me a ways back.
Now I sit and observe.
Like I'm hoovering over everyone and everything.

I can hear the music play,
and I see everyone laugh and smile.
What has become of me?

I'm the living dead,
a poor soul trapped in this life.
An angel waiting to grow its wings.

Insanity is nice, though.
It always keeps me occupied.
And it's somehow, funner than being sane.

People keep talking,
but I'm lost in my own world.
I kinda like it here better anyway.


EVEN ANGELS FALL.

© Copyright 2000 Lisa Marie - All Rights Reserved
poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
1 posted 2000-08-05 04:30 AM


i think we all often like to stay lost "in our own world"......superb job here...taking words right out of my heart!
Beth
Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
2 posted 2000-08-05 05:11 AM


~I spend alot of time in my own world so I can understand this well.....Its easier to be lost there sometimes..I liked this!!~
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2000-08-05 05:15 AM


I really, really related to this and when I got to
insanity is nice though
it always keeps me occupied
I laughed out loud thinking how do you know me so well
Be well
Kethry

"There are times in life a kindred spirit comes along. Hold onto those people. They are what makes this life worth living."- Anon

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