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Isis
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0 posted 2000-08-05 02:24 AM


Connor said -
To thee my heart I pledge my heart
To thy life I pledge my own
None can ever take thy place
Or kill the seed that's been sown

For you are my heart
And I am yours
And never will we part
Our love endures. . ..

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Brianna said -

To thee I pledge my heart,
To thy life I pledge my own
None will ever take thy place
Or kill the seed we've sown.

For you are my heart,
And I am yours,
We will never be apart,
Our love endures.

Element of fire
Spirit of light,
Bless this wonderous union,
Tonight and every night.

Blessed be our union - blessed be.....

Connor and Brianna's vow's,
Took place on the highest point of their beloved bay,
True love such as theirs,
Will never be taken away....

* Just playing with story lines Sven and I were playing with earlier tonight, so half of this poem is his too.  It was so nice I wanted to finish it off!!*
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I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)




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DJLI
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1 posted 2000-08-05 04:02 AM


this was very captivating! I couln't wait to read it all. wonderful job here.  
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EVEN ANGELS FALL.

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poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
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Perth, Western Australia, Australia
2 posted 2000-08-05 04:22 AM


Oh i liked this!!! Brianna's love captured my heart in Sven's poem...and her youve had her capture it again! romance blessed by nature herself!
Kethry
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3 posted 2000-08-05 07:31 AM


This truly is a fine conclusion to Brianna's love from Sven's poem.
Keth

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole

Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
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4 posted 2000-08-05 08:31 AM


Isis, such beautiful vows spoken, thanks for sharing, captures the feeling of true love.

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Isis
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5 posted 2000-08-05 06:37 PM


Thanks glad you enjoyed it Connor and Brianna had a love we all would envy..  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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6 posted 2000-08-06 02:00 AM


Isis,
     indeed they did my friend. . . indeed they did. . . the story continues. . . their story continues. . . a love for all time. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Isis
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7 posted 2000-08-06 07:36 PM


A love for all time ......  their story continues.....  ahhh what a lovely thought  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
8 posted 2000-08-06 07:36 PM


A love for all time ......  their story continues.....  ahhh what a lovely thought  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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