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Beth
Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia

0 posted 2000-08-04 12:20 PM




You think your one to talk
and give advice
Ive got news for you
And it isnt nice.

You've dug yourself a
hole with me
Thinking Im your b***h
Is that what you could see?

Sitting there with that needle
Stuck up your arm,
Thinking arrogantly
Thinking it wont cause harm.

Oh, your gonna have to think
again
Your gonna die from drugs
And it will be too late then.

You havent listened to a word
thats been said
Your already half way to being
dead.

You know its not too late to
turn around
I did it
And a new start was found.

But if you want to go that
way
Think again
I aint gonna stay.

I wont watch this another time
You see,
Cos I have found happiness
in ME!



© Copyright 2000 Cherie - All Rights Reserved
poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
1 posted 2000-08-04 12:26 PM


you are a very strong woman beth! and this is a wonderful way to display that! but remember....some people are weak and lost..just make sure if they reach a hand out to you, you'll still help them! you are a legend!
Beth
Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
2 posted 2000-08-04 12:31 PM


~Dawn..
As you know I would never turn someone down in need of a helping hand...thanks ~


[This message has been edited by Beth (edited 08-04-2000).]

Deranger
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
3 posted 2000-08-04 12:37 PM


Strong woman indeed.  But remember, some people don’t want to be saved. I’m not saying it’s too late, only that some would rather sulk in the rotting darkness than be blinded by the light.  
But it seems to me, this guy doesn’t quite understand what he is missing.  Ah, sweet tragedy.    



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Spreading insanity, one post at a time

Beth
Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
4 posted 2000-08-04 01:12 PM


~Deranger,
Your exactly right. Unfortunately this person didnt want to be saved and I cant even begin to imagine where he is now. I did my best and getting on with life now. I can only give my best. Thanks deeply for your reply~

[This message has been edited by Beth (edited 08-04-2000).]

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