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Zunera
Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 30
Pakistan

0 posted 2000-08-04 11:25 AM


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This is dedicated to the most important person in my Life, who has always been there to sooth me and I'm proud to have him with me today and wish him to be with me for the rest of the days of my life.
So, here it goes to 'My Dream' from his 'MY'
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Rain drops fall and dance around,
As they slowly fall upon the ground.
On rooftops and on window-pain,
I hear, the pitter patter of the rain.

The pitter patter of the rain,
Beats out a song, a sweet refrain.
It's music that I love to hear,
warms my heart, that shakes in fear

So!

I wonder if, I could say?
I fell in love one rainy day.
It rained in May I know that's true,
Was that the day I first met you?

Did it rain? I don't recall,
If it rained that day at all.
But I'm sure it did, I really do,
That day I gave my heart to you.

Un-noticed, Unrevealed,
I gave my heart to you unleashed.
and never I exposed,  never I unclothed,
that trust and love in me that breed.

Now every time I see the rain,
That dances on the window-pain.
It reminds of the day we met,
That day my love I shan't forget.

I shan't forget I never will,
The day you gave to me that thrill.
and I waited for the words that you might say
"I'll love you Dear, and I really will".

But!

Those days are pictures in my mind,
Of when we met, what would we find.
And when we met I know its true,
I fell more and more, in love with you.

and when today, I missed YOU,
I fell more and more in LOVE with you.


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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
1 posted 2000-08-04 11:50 AM


How sweet!  
Deranger
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
2 posted 2000-08-04 12:00 PM


Ah, the lovers’ reminisce…the first day they met.  I wonder why that’s such a pleasant subject?  Well, I guess it doesn’t matter.  
Nice work.    


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Beth
Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
3 posted 2000-08-04 12:35 PM


~This is adorable~
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