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courtney923
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 43


0 posted 2000-08-04 09:45 AM


My wish for death, may seem quite bold
Under this light, gets real cold
Hindered with a disease, somehow to suffer with ease
The darkside of passion, bares no trees
Haphazard my mindset, swollowed by fees
Sliced all my insides, and hung them to bleed
Filling the bottom, the redest of sea
Swim in this potion, will rot all it sees
Power of darkness, chilling my knees
Forgot my sorrow, but gave it my needs
Sucking the sanity, engorging in brains
This ocean of torture, the graveyard of sea


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Deranger
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
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1 posted 2000-08-04 12:23 PM


Beautifully dark and permeating with morbid symbols…so I loved it.  Yeah, I’m definitely not it teenie anymore.  

A wish?  That’s quite a powerful thing.  Few people realize how powerful they really are.   There’s no telling when it might come true.  Perhaps, right when everything finally makes sense and your again happy, it’ll come true.   Maybe, you should rethink your wish?  



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