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courtney923
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 43


0 posted 2000-08-04 09:41 AM


Having it all, with no place to go
Inside this closet, and nobody's home
A chain amungst, my humble wear
Inside this prison, and nobody cares
Wired my jaw, and braced my feet
Not seeing the movement, but hearing him breathe
My cries go unanswered, yet I still bleed
Becoming an animal, that noone will feed
Knocking for sound, the rythym is daunting
Lost all the feeling, and now I can't speak
Becoming brain dead, and lost my feet
Sadness is sullen, my eyes cry pain
Holding me hostage, I'm growing weak
Reaching hysteria, hallucinations reek
Holding on for life, is getting awfully bleak
As the door opens, the blood begins to seep
Hanging by hooks, like a piece of meat
The smell of death, beneath my feet
Flies invade, as I become a feast
Adding to the torture, with no way to leave
My mind without rest, wandering amlessly
Running, yet I'm nowhere, as I begin to sleep


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Deranger
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
1 posted 2000-08-04 12:32 PM


Now this is darkness, this is gloom!   Exquisite misery has never been so grimly animated.  This is what Dark Passions is all about!



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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-08-05 08:48 AM


This goes beyond 3am dark. I particularly like sadness is sullen. Wish I'd written it.
Be well
Kethry.

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole

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