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sash
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 125


0 posted 2000-08-03 10:54 PM





I have been chosen
to feel...
the pain of rejection,
the heartache of loss,
the searing resentment no matter the cost.

The warmth of a kiss,
The passion so wild,
the carnal indulgence of one nature's child.



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catalinamoon
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Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-08-03 11:24 PM


Sash, I am here with you on this one, as well. Very precisely stated, and so true.
Catalinamoon

Practice can make anything perfect...even grief can become an art.
Merrit Malloy



Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 197
Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A.
2 posted 2000-08-04 12:22 PM


Sash,
Very nice work here. I especially like the last line, it flows perfectly. Keep up the good work, neighbor!


Sing while you may
-The Prophet Q'spel

Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen
-The Prophet Q'spel


lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
3 posted 2000-08-04 12:58 PM


What a wonderful little poem!
Give me feeling above not-feeling any  day!  


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

4 posted 2000-08-04 09:20 AM


~Ooh,...even the title stings. Nice writing. Short and packed. Take care S. *Peace.
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