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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2000-08-03 02:12 PM


Inside walls
So dirty ivy can’t climb
Hidden views,
Lack of news,
Captured demented lost minds,
Not the bright
Rainy night,
Iron bars press against brain,
Slowly done
Bending one,
Escaping through throngs insane.
Body attack
Straps in back,
Lost too deep to ever find.
Inside walls
Dead reality still calls.

Gloom

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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2000-08-03 03:27 PM


WOW,
another powerfully expressed work from you P. Gloom...

regards,
sudhir

Professor Gloom
Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
2 posted 2000-08-03 05:56 PM


Thank you , Sudhir Iyer,
glad you enjoyed my words,
powerful emotions from dramatic times.

Gloom


poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
3 posted 2000-08-04 09:30 AM


yes, this is very powerful! alot of us,in days gone by, can relate.
MMoonchild
Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
PA
4 posted 2000-08-04 10:25 AM


Lost too deep to ever find.
Inside walls
Dead reality still calls.

walls can be removed brick by brick don't you think Professor...if one works at it
~~soft  thoughts
M

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