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My Life is like a Storm
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My Life is like a Storm |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
My life is like a storm-- chaotic, without any purpose. I struggle everyday to weave meaning in what I see. Oftentimes, the sole comfort harvested is that thought that I am not alone. Other souls, perhaps fumbling as I am, may have thought the same in their unending search for solace. My only hope that we-- humans as we all are--frail, could sculpt enough strength to understand life, however unsuccessfully. Perhaps this act of hoping is the beginning. But to what end?.. Destiny, with your smile, may we all find out before we lose what's left of our humanity. |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Oooohhh. Pretty. I likes it a lot. Kethry Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Sorry. Deep empathy for the maelstrom of emotions. But pretty in the awareness of united humanity all struggling in the same direction. Kethry Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
There is consolation in knowing that we are not alone, and others share our experiences. You did a superb job of expressing this and more!! Loved it!1 The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
good job of showing the bond loneliness can give you sometimes. very good!!!! kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Sometimes simply being must sufice...hmm, you're right in accusing others of suffering in the same way... ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
And we can never give up hope. Very good poem, touching, expressive. catalinamoon |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Great depiction of how we struggle within ourselves for the answers to life's questions... ~Sash~ |
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