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Dark Poetry #2

Sub-ego

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

0 posted 2000-08-03 02:54 AM

Sub-ego
(this one’s a bit weird, I’m afraid)

Negative matter
Bites its way
Into my brain
Anti-energy
Slithers about
In my ego
In my id
In and out
Blending my being
With my surrounding
Confusing my with
With my without

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

Lynne Dale
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 114
Melbourne Victoria

1 posted 2000-08-03 02:56 AM

Lotharingia,
you are one of my favourite poets. Big hugs.

Kethry.
When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole.

poutprincess
Senior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia

2 posted 2000-08-03 04:29 AM

cant say i can completely figure this one out...but the way it flows and folds..crawled right into me! you pulled me in unsuspecting!

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

3 posted 2000-08-03 07:59 AM

Lotharingia, (hope this repy is not a duplicate)..I felt the mixture of emotions, and questions about what we are, where we are?? I may be wrong but in any event, I love your work!!!1

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

4 posted 2000-08-03 08:04 AM

Uta..I understood it, but the title is what gave it away. As I was reading, I was thinking about how it related to me at times. You are intuitive about such things. Nice work. Hardrock

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