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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-08-03 01:43 AM



I don’t love you,
This is just a game,
I toyed with your heart
So I could gain some fame,
Caring for your needs is not what I plan to do,
Using you till the last ounce is what I should do,
You ask yourself if you believe this to be true,
Wake up and listen to the message all around you,
So simple was it to capture your heart,
Now shall I crush it with a mighty blow,
You deny these claims that I have made,
You are a fool to think that I really cared,
Spare yourself this misery and pain,
Leave before I change my thoughts,
For thoughts of mine now the devil has bought.


Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

© Copyright 2000 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
1 posted 2000-08-03 02:21 AM


That sounds just like several people I have know speaking. Hmmm. Got me thinking ...
Great work!


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
2 posted 2000-08-03 04:43 AM


these little games make us feel powerful..but leave us empty...this is a very strong poem...i feel the words...great job
Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
3 posted 2000-08-03 07:33 AM


When it is a game..there is no winner, very strong words, such a tragedy that it is a part of life. Great poem!!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Lynne Dale
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since 2000-07-18
Posts 114
Melbourne Victoria
4 posted 2000-08-03 10:42 AM


Aaaahh,blind adoration where would we be without it. Nice poem
Keth

Kethry.
When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole.


Verve
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore
5 posted 2000-08-03 11:36 AM



Tsk tsk ... the cruelty of the dating game ...
I think u have captured it very aptly.

~verve

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