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one LONELY day
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one LONELY day |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
one LONELY day Reaching for someone that doesn't reach back. Wanting to Love them and they won't Love back. They seem to be totally unaware how desperately I need them to say I want you and I need you will you please stay. That moment never arrives instead they nonchalantly turn away. My heart thinks perhaps they desire a chase. The faster she runs the more I can quicken the pace. I hope with all my heart to win but realize destiny controls this race and now I must stop and deal with rejections looming ugly face. Left to feel the same ole pain once again I hate the way one LONELY day leads into where the next one begins. JamesleeAugust02,2000 |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
James, I know exactly how this feels. Hurts a lot. Nice poem with great expression. Catalinamoon Practice can make anything perfect...even grief can become an art. Merrit Malloy |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh ouch you. James,...I was feeling this inside of me. I still am. WoW! Take care now. *Peace. |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Know it! Feel it! Live it!! Thank you for saying it! Click |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James you are breaking my heart with all your sad poems. I wish I could help. Maybe I can...... check your e-mail my friend!!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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ilph Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78 |
I think with poems such as this it's enough to read it...and feel...and not reply |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Catalina, SpitFire, Click, Marina, and ilph for your lovely responses...I think we have all experienced some of these lonely days...James |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
yes, James, we all have... my regards and best wishes... sudhir |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sudhir for your response and wishes...James |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
This is so sad I can feel your sadness and your fears, very much told of your heart of this you gave a part to another. We all know and can relate with this. Hope things get better soon. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
James...I think the key is in being yourself, living your life and just enjoying the people around you. Accept an invitation and enjoy the company...or extend an invitation and just enjoy the moment. If someone enjoys sharing their time with you, they will return. As a friend or a lover..which ever it progresses. Feel, live, enjoy and what you are looking for will find you in the end. (Atleast I hope so anyway...lol...I am trying this approach  )When you are old and grey and full of sleep, And nodding by the fire, take down this book, And slowly read, and dream of the soft look Your eyes had once, and of their shodows deep; How many loved your moments of glad grace, And loved your beauty with love false or true, But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you, And loved the sorrows of your changing face... William Butler Yeats |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
A wonderfully sad poem. Very well done. And (((hugs))) if that's how you feel now.  < !signature-->Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo [This message has been edited by lotharingia (edited 08-09-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Big hugs to you, James. Sensitive poem Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh James, my heart too is breaking..thats so sad, and I truly hope you don't have many lonley days ahead!!! A very nice job writing though!!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
James my friend, this is so sad hon, I tend to agree with Marilyn, you have to get out there again, not live in the void you are in now... By a pet if you don't have one - then you are not quite so alone, and always remember you can still email a certain aussie lady.. *hugs* *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* Isis ~ Sovereign of the Spirit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Rosebud, Marilyn, lotharingia, Kethry, Deborah and Isis for the wonderful responses. Marilyn perhaps you and I have experienced similar experiences. I love the final comment "at least I hope so"..Yes I hope so also. Isis I assure you that I am out there circulating..sometimes with success...my days are mixed between wonderful and lonely. This is a reflection on the past ten years for me and sometimes I have moments when I feel like I am trapped in a web and I must escape. Everything is alright. I have always felt most comfortable and secure within a companion relationship...I am still searching for her...James |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
James... I suspected for a minute that you could be my friend, the one I dedicated my last poem to... When I read it I was amazed, it was exactly what he told me... Maybe someday you'll realise that you don't need this too. I hope you will. Huggs, LM. |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
Oh, the bitter-sweet reminder of how much I love your poetry. I was absent for awhile, but your work makes me glad I returned. I hate this feeling that you have captured so well. I hope that things get better for you, I honestly do. Keep it up! Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you LM and LilOne for your nice comments..James |
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