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Of my heart
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Broken_Heart Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 57Netherlands |
Of My Heart I finally told her How I feel today I nearly killed myself So I had to say What my pain was From where it came Why I hurt so much And I am never the same She screamed, She yelled I only did it out of hate Yet I did it out of love Before it was too late I still love her Without a doubt Alas there is another Who screamed it out loud Now she understands Why I hurt inside Atleast I hope she does As I stare into the light I am sorry to have said That I hate and love you But why give me pain If you said I love you, too? I hate your new love I tried to fight What you are becoming With all my might You started lying To me as a friend I suddenly feel sick Is this the end? Perhaps it is best If we part our ways I told you las night In a maddened haze I am hurt inside And wish it was true Yet I have to admit I still love you... Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within... |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This is completely overflowing with emotion. Whoa. Heavy. BH,...written so well. Great. Take it easy. *Peace. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I feel your struggle. I really do. My heart goes out to this one. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
Dear BH So much hurt, pain, confusion. Yet through it all you still love her. Your loyalty is commendable. But always remain true to yourself, no matter what. I feel with you on this one, it is so real and so close to home. Take care, my friend. All the best Sylvia |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I liked this one, it show the multitude of emotions and feelings that is involve in relationships in a flowing format. Gloom |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
How we can feel so angry at someone and still love them. All those mixed emotions to be sorted through. You did a really fine job of expressing this, I could feel your pain and sorrow. Hope you work through this..Great poem!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
WOW! This has so much emotion that I can feel it. My heart goes out to you as I know this feeling...Great writting.. Blessed be, Beth |
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