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Click
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA

0 posted 2000-08-02 06:52 PM




There is only the sound
of the bellows.
As my dented, tarnished,
precious, golden heart,
is tossed into the fire.

To be wrought into
something new?

Was the shape it was in,
the reason it was discarded?
Was it no longer desired,
or charished?

As it turns molten,
the unique, sentimental shape,
it held for so long,
is changed forever.

In the FORGE it is waiting,
a beautiful shimmer of light,

ready for the mold.

To be fashioned into a charm,
that someone can love.


Click



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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-08-02 07:08 PM


Sweet sentiments...hope you find that person desiring a fresh precious charm...James
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-08-02 09:25 PM


What a concept, refashioning your heart in the fire. And sad that anyone denies its original self. Awesome poem.
Cat....

sash
Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125

3 posted 2000-08-02 10:09 PM


Click~You continue to astound Me with yet another heartfelt poem! Your heart has been charmed ever since I have known You, My friend...Wonderful work!


        ~Sash~

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

4 posted 2000-08-02 10:22 PM


~How cleverly thought out and expressed. Oh,...so neat the idea of this. Aah, totally enjoyed. Take care. *Peace.
lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
5 posted 2000-08-03 02:33 AM


How lovely!
And the new one will surely be even better than the last!  


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
6 posted 2000-08-03 11:43 AM


what a way you have with these images! truly creative and inspiring! very much enjoyed the read!
kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
7 posted 2000-08-14 06:44 PM


you express waiting very very well.  i can relate!!

kynder

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
8 posted 2000-08-14 08:29 PM


Inspiring, I return to you the single tear your poem bequested me.  
Be well
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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