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Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2000-08-02 12:06 PM


Circling around your bed
As you lay alseep
Wanting to taste your blood
Your soul for me to keep

Your warmth is overwhelming
Your virgin body is what I crave
I long for the nourishment
For my life I shall save

I will not last much longer
Without you my body will die
I only what to survive this world
So please do not cry

I shall drink you in slowly
Ravish your warmth in my vein
Filling myself with your soul
You shall not feel the pain

Circling around your bed
As you lay asleep
Wanting to taste your blood
Your soul for me to keep


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


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Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-08-02 12:16 PM


DkW...This is really dark..and so beautiful.  Where have you kept this side of you?  Now I have to sit up all night..chilling.  Hardrock
MiseryDivine
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114
Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)
2 posted 2000-08-02 12:36 PM


whooooaaaaa!.....wow! that was reallt good yet creepy...very kewl!
~MiSeRyDivine~~

Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
3 posted 2000-08-02 09:35 AM


A dark side indeed, but so very well done!! Good one DKW!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

4 posted 2000-08-02 09:38 AM


~Uh Huh,...dark and delicious. Whoa Dk whoa. Picturing that is haunting but cool at the same time. Take care you. *Peace.
Lynne Dale
Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114
Melbourne Victoria
5 posted 2000-08-02 09:42 AM


Scary, very scary. I'm glad I read it before midnight. Oops too late. Now how will I sleep. I have a Vampyr poem that's not nearly so scary.
Be well
Kethry

Kethry.
When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole.


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