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firejerm
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA

0 posted 2000-08-01 10:50 PM


Hey, I shared this with a lot of my online friends so bare with me if this is a repeat.  It has been a while since I've posted, hope ya'll haven't forgot about me.

Alone we beg for another's company
TO tell or our dreams and sorrows,
TO talk about forgotten yesterdays
And all of the many tomorrows.

Alone we seek a missing link
TO a chain of empty thoughts,
To escape these figurative walls
That so many of us are caught.

Alone we cry our tears of pain
Which falls upon deaf ears,
Lonely hearts just seek true love
And happiness for the unanswered years.

ALone we are given a miserable mystery
To solve without a single clue,
Trying to find a way to leave it behind
But there's no one to run to.

ALone we finally find true love
Now a single heart becomes two,
Frequently we hear those blessed words
Those being "I love you".

Together we make our way down
A long and unknowing road,
Feeling stress-free and content
Indeed we've lightened the load.

Together we no longer search for
The answer to this fairytale,
Our hearts flutter and minds race
And our emotions set sail.

Together we become secure in each other
And find our place in this mess,
There is no problem we cannot conquer
With such vigor and a little finesse.

Together time passes us by
We prepare to make it eternity,
A day we thought would never seek us
Now we accept with integrity.

Together something goes horribly wrong
And the tears begin to pour,
A soul that once danced lightly
Now lies battered and sore.

Together we try so desperately
To make the situation mend,
But then we see the truth
There is no way to make amends.

Alone again to analyze a dream
And all the promises made,
Questions that go unanswered
And to rest this fantasy is laid.

Alone one cries and the other prospers
Whatever the excuse may have been,
You swear you will never get hurt
With such intesnisty ever again.

Alone we reflect on what we thought
Was indeed destiny's child,
Like all good things it came to an end
And indeed the ride was wild.

Alone we wonder just "what if"
Yet we remember the inflicted pain,
I for one will never go through it again
For this would be totally insane.

Alone we should not be afraid
When love comes knocking at our door,
Yet we jump to seek mistruth
And neglect to remember what it is for.

Alone we can't learn to love
For all we do is break and cry,
Alone we darken within our souls
And eventually
    Alone we will die!

Jeremy T. Sellers
1/17/00 11:22 PM

First one of the new century.




"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

© Copyright 2000 Jeremy T. Sellers - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-08-01 11:00 PM


Wow!  What a sad perspective of one's life, I understand the thinking of this, but hope sincerely hope there is more to life than this...  Over dramatised we'll say.
A wonderful work here hon!!  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



firejerm
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
2 posted 2000-08-01 11:02 PM


Isis my dear, if you can't use a little drama, then what is there?  

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2000-08-01 11:09 PM


Jeremy, I know what you mean, I am always reading something and thinking, God I could have written that. Or at the least, it was written for me! Loved this poem, yes very sad, but life does go that way, and as Hardrock once wrote, cycle in, cycle out. Its good, its bad, its good, its boring, its over..
catalinamoon

kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
4 posted 2000-08-02 12:28 PM


very real... just like life.  the ups the downs the middles in between the strife.  excellent fireguy.  

kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

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