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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States 
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As I sit here in my thoughts still lingering over our last talk... I wonder if we will ever be together. I question what right I have to love you... But still I do... It's as if fate has looked down on me and said "this man is for you." But it seems the path is rocky and overgrown... I suffer deep cuts and scratches as I try to find my way to you. The darkness overcomes me... the moon is my only light. I cannot see the end of this path, only a glimpse of daylight... A hope that is over powering as I make my way towards you... And love... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sounds like me again, Dee, we do have a lot in common. Love the poem, know the feeling. Hope it works out for us both  Sandra |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Dedreia...There is such passion here. Very well done. Hardrock |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I can feel the longing here..Excellent poem!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this is very nice... "the darkness overcomes me the moon is my only light. I cannot see the end of this path, only a glimpse of daylight" sometimes all we need to lead the way is a small shimmer of light..our heart leads the way, we dont need our eyes...and looks like your heart is storming up that path towards the love that lay waiting!! |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
u read my mind, poutprincess.. i love this part, too.. i've always loved sad poems but the ones i like the most are those with hope.. like this one, i suppose.. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Loved the dark and light contrast in this poem. Be well Kethry "There are times in life a kindred spirit comes along. Hold onto those people. They are what makes this life worth living."- Anon |
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