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the loss of my mother
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the loss of my mother |
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dmonger New Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 3 |
This poem was written for my mother. She was killed by my father 15 years ago. she died on November 16th 1985 I was nine monthes old. You left me to long ago, It wasn't your time to go So many tears have I cried Sometimes I wish my death would coincide I have thought many times of taking my own life It would only take one cut from my knife Accepting your death is the hardest thing to do Even though I don't want to I know it's true This is my final good bye Though how I wish I could just say hi |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
DMonger, Im sorry about your mom. I hope writing helps you, and welcome to Dark Passions. Hope your ok, and thanks for sharing..Sad poem but well expressed. The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Welcome to Dark Passions! I also hope venting through your poems help you. I am sure you have had a rough life, but we are here for ya now. When needed just call upon us!  Peace, DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
This was very sad and dark, perfect for Dark passions. I'm sorry for your loss, but this was truly a great poem. Welcome to passions  ~Broken~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, what a sad story. So sorry for your loss. You are in the right place if you want support and friendship. Take care Catalinamoon |
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dmonger New Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 3 |
Thank you everyone who replyed. And yes writting does help me thats why I do it. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
what a battle you have. you express your thoughts and feelings very well!! i hope you post much more!! looking forward to reading it!! keep keepin on... welcome to dark!! love, kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
D...Your mom's death was untimely and tragic, but look at the wonderful gift she left for us: YOU!! Through your writings you may find peace...and bring peace to many others. We welcome you. Hardrock |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
d...your love for your mom..although only known too a short time..but the most important of which was the sharing of her womb and the birth from someone who loved you...this all will remain with you forever and she knows..she is leading you...the angel on your shoulder...letting you know how much you were wanted and loved... and I feel for your loss in such a tragic way ~~soft hugs Maureen *and if you ever need a friend or shoulder just email me...I have a tender one to lend and having never had a child..there is always that mothering instinct within me...to share |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Firstly welcome to Passions..  A beautiful heartfelt poem and wish here hon. I too send sympathy for your loss of the mother you had know chance to know. How tragic. I hope you know that she is up there loving you and watching over you, your Guardian Angel.. and in that respect you are never alone. If you need to talk about these sometime please feel free to email me... I have lost a few dear people myself.. I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh D,...Welcome here. I am also sorry for your truly tragic loss. This poem of yours is heartfelt and well expressed. Do take care. *Peace. |
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