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juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-08-01 12:27 PM


Closing my eyes I am taken back,
To another time, another place.
Memories wash over me,
My heart drowning in my tears.
Tender kisses,
Warm embraces,
Images dance through my mind.
It was another time, another place.
Silly laughter,
A stroll in gentle rain,
A picnic under the elm,
Fireside passion,
The way you spoke my name.
My soul is forever tied to yours,
Pink ribbons of love,
Now faded into gray.
It was another time, another place.
I long to be free,
Imprisoned in sorrow I still remain.
Such a reckless theif you were,
To steal my heart,
Then carelessly toss it away.
So painful are the journeys,
To that other time,
That other place.


[This message has been edited by juliet_2u (edited 08-01-2000).]

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Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
1 posted 2000-08-01 08:48 AM


What an excellent piece!! You did a tremendous job of taking me along, nice imagery. It can be painful sometimes to remember, I know. Great JOb!!!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

juliet_2u
Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-08-01 09:11 AM


Deborah, there is no higher compliment than being able to take you along with me and for that I thank you. All the best to you, Juls
Dedreia
Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172
Kokomo, Indiana, United States
3 posted 2000-08-01 01:21 PM


How well anyone with a broken heart can relate to this my dear.  WoW!  I have been there a few times myself.  I loved it.  Dee


juliet_2u
Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
4 posted 2000-08-01 05:55 PM


Dedreia, thanks so much for your kind words and welcome to Passions. Take great care, Juls
Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
5 posted 2000-08-01 06:09 PM


Juls...Excellent!!  Deb said it best...I was along for the ride with you...every step of the way. The last three lines are the best...and so true.  Hardrock
juliet_2u
Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
6 posted 2000-08-01 06:18 PM


Yeah Hard I gotta agree with you. The last three lines are ones we can all relate to no matter what our story is. Thanks for coming along on my journey back in time with me. All the best to you, Juls
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