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Dark Poetry #2

Coming of Some

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2000-08-01 12:26 PM

Shining of moon,
Passing away too soon,
Memos of love,
Stored high above,
Coming of light,
Wonder what appears is sight,
Rising from their caves,
Feared shadows have now become brave,
Brace thyself for something new has formed,
Like a newborn baby being borne.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

juliet_2u
Senior Member

since 2000-07-23

Posts 1125
North Carolina

1 posted 2000-08-01 09:59 AM

Xeonox, this was so very beautiful. Thanks for sharing it. Best wishes, Juls

juliet_2u
Senior Member

since 2000-07-23

Posts 1125
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-08-01 10:02 AM

Sorry but I had to come back for one more read.....Feared shadows have now become brave....that line really blew me away. Thanks again Xeonox, Juls

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

3 posted 2000-08-01 03:31 PM

this is a great piece my friend. its nice to read work form all the great people i have met on here and i hope that you are planing to say here as well it would be a shame to lose a writer as great as you, cause you are one of my fav's.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

4 posted 2000-08-01 04:28 PM

oh yes nox!! this is so very very good. i echo juliet2u thoughts.. feared shadows become brave.. wow. thank you!! loved it!!

kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

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