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Nikolette Sadness

Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 337
port richey fl.

0 posted 2000-08-01 12:03 PM

again with the unedited.....its her i think...my best friend

~Jealousy~

the words haunt me like my own shadow.
constantly there taking pleasure in my pain.
the things they say to her,
cut deep through my vein.
its hurt more than i can bear,
but i do.
i bear the pain,
as thoughts flow true.
never saying anything,
for fear of rejection.
they've always liked her more than me,
and the jealousy takes part of me.
i hate these feelings that i feel.
never dealing with what is real.
my mind runs in every direction,
never making a true connection.
the pain she puts me through cannot compete,
with the pain i give myself.
yet i bear it through and through.
but on no sleeve do i wear it.
it scares me, the thought, of losing her.
but wear it do i not.
and never could i tell her,
what i really thought.

Nikolette Sadness

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2000-08-01 12:08 PM

Powerful use of words. Such a great peace. Great job!!!

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Enchanted Star
Junior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 14
New Port Richey, FL

2 posted 2000-08-01 01:29 AM

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[This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 08-01-2000).]

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

3 posted 2000-08-01 08:46 AM

Always try to remember what a beautiful person YOU are, I hear your pain. Good job writing!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

4 posted 2000-08-01 10:18 AM

Ah the darkness inside
will so often devide us
yet the power is all eternal one

Jealousy twists us
but love ressurects us
in the image of the light we shun

The pain and the pride
etenaly hide in the past
where our dreaming is done

The last of the pain
and the love it has slain
dies with the memory of one

Oh Danny boy, the pipes, the pipes are calling
From glen to glen, and down the mountain side
The summer's gone, and all the roses falling
'Tis

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

5 posted 2000-08-01 11:02 AM

This was a really great poem!

i hate these feelings that i feel.
never dealing with what is real.

This is a great couple of lines. I can understand what you're going thru.

Chere
Junior Member

since 2000-07-26

Posts 18

6 posted 2000-08-01 11:02 AM

Some say jealousy is a sign that you're in love. So which is it, in love with life or in love with the unifying image?

Although strings may dangle and appear to consume your unique beauty, the strings of jealousy can and do set one true and it is you that shapes the shears*

Your words and thoughts are lovely*

Chere*

MMoonchild
Senior Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
PA

7 posted 2000-08-01 08:10 PM

a wonderful poem, N

and the jealousy takes part of me.
i hate these feelings that i feel.

I think we all feel this at some point and hate the thought that we are capable of it
~~soft hugs
Maureen

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

8 posted 2000-08-01 08:26 PM

Me too! I can relate!! I hate when I feel angry, jealous, those feelings are normal but bad, bad for you, bad for your relationships etc. All we can do is recognise the feelings, deal and move on, hatred is a bad place to be... Hope you soon steer back to a happier plain.

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

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