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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Life stabs you in the back, Just when things seem flawless. Life turns around on you, Life laughs in your face. Does time heal all wounds? Or is it just a poorly manufactured bandage? Please make my head cease to spin. I revolve again and again. Sometimes I am so lost, Somethings never go away, Sometimes I just want to sob, Just make them all stop lying. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I cannot imagine such a hard cold place. I do not know the answers why. I have written a poem similar to this called Why me? Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Another little gem, Jenn, you express your pain well, and in a way that many relate to. Peace Cat... [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 08-01-2000).] |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is a very good poem that i enjoyed reading. do keep it up my friend and sorry i don't have the answers either. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I know how this is. Just when you begin to smile you get a slap in the face and start to cry. I hate that feeling sooo much! Joy |
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