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That Way |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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I hate that way you stare at me... I detest it when you stop. I refuse to be your toy... I can't bear to be alone. I hate that way I stare at you... Even after you hurt me deeply. I can't stand your teasing... Yet I find myself reaching out for your hand. I hate that way I smile foolishly, And you can't let me stay mad. I shudder at the thought of us forever... But I can't seem to wish us apart. I hate that way you stuck around... When I've always tried to make you leave. I want you to stop caring, Stop wanting more from me. Written for Joey...a guy who never ceased to confuse me... this was every other day for us.(When we were together.) |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Is it not sad that when we want someone to leave it is hard for us to let them leave? This is a poem I defnitely give A++++. Awesome!!! Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
So confusing ARE the feelings of wanting, even needing to be free of someone yet knowing you can't bear to let them go. You expressed this well here. Best wishes, Juls [This message has been edited by juliet_2u (edited 08-01-2000).] |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Another good one from you my friend. i glad your happy on here so keep up all of the good work. Love Jeremiah I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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