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Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

0 posted 2000-07-31 05:36 PM


I plan on adding some omore to this poem but right now this is all I have.

Greatest Fear

Its not her I'm scared of,
Its the thought of losing your love,
Seeing the way you talk about her,
Makes me wonder how long I have,
Before someone else, someone new,
Suddenly comes along and takes you,

Maybe I just worry too,
Or maybe I know how I will miss your touch,
So right now I am worried about us,
Missing your kisses and thinking too much,
I just can't seem to stop the next tear,
Because losing you is my greatest fear,
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"There is no always forever-just this-R.Smith

broken glass never cuts the way it should-Gin



[This message has been edited by Ginners (edited 07-31-2000).]

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EWDrake
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 183
NC, USA
1 posted 2000-07-31 06:00 PM


Gin, you have here a nice work in progress. Inspires me to dig up one I did in my Hospice days. Just take care not to get so tied up in anticipating an end that you forget to see the potential of today. This is a very nice beginning,
Take care,
Evan

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