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kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

0 posted 2000-07-31 04:56 PM



Everyone had someone,
I stood alone.

All accompanied by another,
Strolling and kicking up sand;
I walked solitare,
A little cold in
Summer heat.

Talking amongst themselves,
Completely unaware
To the blaring
Grating
Piercing
Hateful screams
My loneliness was hurling
Their way.

*****kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

© Copyright 2000 Kynder - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-07-31 05:08 PM


OMG, have I ever felt this way. You walk alone and look at all the couples, and you are screaming inside, and no one even notices. Whew, so strong..
PS thanks for reading some of my stuff that was lost in the back of the pages  

Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
2 posted 2000-07-31 05:16 PM


Kynder, how we torture ourselves..I see couples when Ive been alone sure they are blissfully happy..some are, but some are not as they appear. You did quite a remarkable job at expressing those feelings we get when we are alone!! Another great one!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
3 posted 2000-07-31 05:30 PM


Indeed yes. A horrible feeling. Cat and Deb are both right! And no, people don't notice, do they ? Do they even revel in it? I wonder ...
Lovely poem Kyndie!  


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
4 posted 2000-08-01 03:00 PM


sis i'm sending you Hugs hugs and more Hugs cause i love you and you seem like blood so next time you see those people and alone have alittle fun and pick and throw some of that sandy mud at them. enjoyed the read sis and hope i made you smile.  
         Love BroBean

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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