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kynder
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

0 posted 2000-07-31 04:36 PM



Walking squares on a circle path

Falling up the spiral stairs

Untying a straight flat line

Drunk off sobriety's grain

Dancing to silent sounds

Jumping over invisible

Blockades

Insanity abounds....................


*****kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

© Copyright 2000 Kynder - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-07-31 04:44 PM


OH, good description, very powerful.
Catalinamoon

Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
2 posted 2000-08-01 02:40 PM


well SisBean being insane doe's have it's ups. i don't know about downs cause i've been insane for years and have had alot more fun than most people. enjoyed this read keep it up Sis. Love always Jay your little jumping Bean

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-08-01 02:47 PM


~Ooh Kynder,...this is so twisty and awesome. Yes!!! 'Tis Great in it's tangled weave. I love that. Superb title for this masterpiece. Be well K. *Peace.
Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
4 posted 2000-08-01 05:25 PM


Kynder..you do so well with this type writing.  Real mind twister here.  Loved it.  Hardrock
Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
5 posted 2000-08-01 05:46 PM


The oppositions here are teriffic!!! Love your style!! Excellent writing!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

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